Topic: How books such as feed and movies like wall-e are prediction the destruction of our future generation.
T1a: Introduction of allegory
T1b: Introduction to the advancement of technology
T2: story line of feed
T3: Few paragraphs on different connections
T4: Story line of wall-e
T5: Few paragraphs on connections
Conclusion: over all trend and where is technology heading
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Sounds like you've got your head in the game. This is not only well organized but very thorough. It'll be simple to write out your arguments based on your topic starters, its obvious that it can lead to a whole paper. Only thing is i guess you can create your thesis rather than show your essential question because eventually your gonna need it and have to strengthen it further on, why not kill two birds with one stone, no? Anyways, i wanted to do wall-e- to but i thought itd have been silly (haha) no but its good that your using it because what it depicted for viewers was something very serious, and not only a future dilemma on our hands but one we have now in modern America, i guess thats where feeds "allegory" kicks in. i hope my comment was helpful. Goodluck on your paper.
ReplyDeleteI see that you have a good plan on what you want to write about. I think if you make good connections and give good examples your paper would be strong. I think you should make your thesis more brief and more explination about what you are trying to prove. What is going to be the main points in your allegory? I also chose wall-e as one of my topics and I think that was a perfect example because of all the brain washing they were using in the video just to convince people to get on the space ship thingy. But good luck with you paper and I hope you do well
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